But I imagine you are asleep.
I see the steel blue of your lips, but I imagine you are asleep.
I see the porcelain of your features, the waxen skin glistens, and I imagine that you are asleep.
I wish the coldness of your fingers were warmed by mine, the pallor to fade, the broken vessel to heal, here while you sleep.
I hear your breath as a laugh, a rattling sigh as you come here to lay, a resignation to the world, when it fell about you as you sleep.
But I imagine you are asleep.
* * *
Many years ago fancied myself to be a poet, and it think I’ll take up the habit once again.
Hope you enjoy what I may or may not produce.
24 March, 2011 at 11:03 pm
steel blue? porcelain? waxen? are we busy running through the “3rd formers’ big book of metaphorical cliches”?
come back when you’ve gotten through school c english eh?
and please for the love of christ don’t tell us you also fancy yourself as an emo artist!
27 March, 2011 at 6:28 pm
so, commenting thru anonymouse aeh?
a coward and a fcking arsehole.
what are the odds?
13 May, 2011 at 9:17 pm
Ignore emo – i think he’s kinda missed the point. keep writing. the world needs more reality
24 May, 2011 at 7:38 pm
actually, i wrote this on twitter during my linchbreak one day.
in retrospect, it is awful.
doesn’t make Emo any less of an arsehat but.